Q: "How can you write
without knowing what will happen?"
A: I have a broad plan...sorta.
Everyone
approaches writing stories differently. I happen to be someone who can come up
with stories better on-the-spot, rather than saying, "Okay, first this,
then this, then this..." etc, etc. When I sat down to write Embassy, I already knew the ending. I eventually
scrapped that ending and wrote a new one because the overall story changed, but
the point is, I had an ending I was working toward.
#1. I
CREATE ON-THE-SPOT MUCH MORE EFFECTIVELY THAN PLANNING STUFF OUT.
The first draft was the hardest part because even though I had an
end, I still needed to get there. So what did I do? I didn't go to the drawing
board and line up events. I didn’t decide what emotions and lessons should pop
up where, or what the character arcs would do to the story. No, I took my
laptop and wrote and wrote and wrote and wrote and let the story evolve.
Basically, Embassy is a product of whims.
#2. IMAGINATION FIRST, STRUCTURE SECOND.
From where I stand, plotting looks like a cage. I like being free.
I don't want to see every mile marker and have foresight of detail. I want to
go for a stroll and have a bird poop on my head. I want to trip on a rock, bang
my head on a branch, and get my shoe lost in the mud.
My point is, I want the story to surprise me as I write it. Okay,
I understand plotting doesn’t show you every…little…detail, but it still shows
a lot. You usually know what situations your characters will be in before they get into them. I like to just have
things happen.
Quoth the Joker: 'Do I look like a guy with a
plan?'
#3. THINGS.
WILL. CHANGE.
Remember how I said I knew the beginning and the end of Embassy, and that I just needed to fill in the middle?
Well, guess what? I got through the first draft. I got through the second
draft. I got through the third draft.
Then something happened as I started working on the fourth draft.
THE ENDING CHANGED. And not only the ending, but some characters and even the
setting. Four drafts in and the story started rewriting itself. By the fifth
draft, Embassy was a totally
different book from the one I had written only five months earlier.
But who would have known that all these changes were for the
better? Now the ending resonates with the beginning of the book. The settings
feel more realistic. The characters are real people. The more I revised Embassy, the more I discovered the story I wanted to
tell.
#4. I CAN
REVISE AND EDIT ON-THE-SPOT.
Similar to writing on the spot, I can edit on the spot. I don't
have pages of notes to look through, or guides to follow. I treat everything independently,
then connect them. Maybe that's why I scrapped Part 2 and completely rewrote
it. It just didn't fit with the new Part 1 anymore. And don’t even get me
started on how much I shredded Part 3.
Sure, outlining stories doesn't set it in concrete. However, many
people are afraid to deviate from their original plots, even if the original
plot isn’t the strongest plot the story could have. Mine certainly wasn't. So
think about how you can change your plot to make your story stronger.
#5. I
WANT MY CHARACTERS TO BE IN CONTROL OF THE STORY.
The first and second drafts of Embassy were terrible. Heck, even the third draft.
At the time, they seemed great. Looking back…noooooope.
Drafts four and five, however, were a different story in every
regard. The characters became their own people. The plot flowed to its own
current. My characters asked for freedom, and I granted it to them. Of course,
I had to tweak things here and there, but for the most part, their identities
were their own.
In the end, the characters formed the story. They wanted something
different than I originally did. The ending changed because they showed me what
would be effective. Their lives influence the flow and depth of the novel. The
characters are in control. (Embassy is a
heavily character-driven novel.) This doesn't mean bad things won't happen to
them, it means their lives and emotions drive the story forward.
I'm 20,000 words into Embassy's sequel!
I admit: I plotted a bit of the book, but only so I know what dots I needed to connect.
I throw the rest of the story on the page as it comes to me.
What are your thoughts on outlining? Pantser or Plotter?
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