The Andromeda Galaxy and the Pillars of Creation

This post is a long time coming, because NASA released this picture almost three weeks ago. The video I'm posting below really throws the sheer size of the universe in your face...particularly the sheer size of the Andromeda Galaxy (galaxy M31 for anyone who wants to be technical about it).

Take a look. This picture contains more than 200 billion stars (that's 200,000,000,000 stars). Every single point of light is a star, and the average distance between stars is roughly 4.5 light years, so you can imagine the density and scale of this.

Enjoy! It's always awesome to see new perspectives.

Another amazing picture Hubble recently took revisited one of the most famous (if not the most famous) picture in astronomy: the Pillars of Creation. The original picture is put side-by-side with the newest picture so that you can see just how much detail Hubble is able to capture now as compared to 20 years ago.

Beautiful, huh? The universe is amazing. (And both Andromeda and the Eagle Nebula are referred to in passing in Embassy and Resonance).

Reading the First Chapter of Embassy

I'm trying something new out, and step one of that trying something new was to read the first chapter of Embassy for you all, for free, on YouTube! It starts exactly one minute in. You'll get to hear all of my pronunciations and what not.

So without further ado...enjoy!

As always, go ahead and purchase your own copy! Ebooks are $2.99 and paperbacks are $12.50-ish.

Punctuation-Induced Whiplash

An Author's Calendar

This popped into my head the other day, so I had to make it. It's completely true, isn't it?

Wild Giveaway Weekend 1/31 -- 2/2

It's a Wild Giveaway Weekend! I will give a FREE Kindle (MOBI file) or PDF copy of Embassy to ANYONE that likes my Facebook Page or subscribes to this blog and messages me about the Giveaway.

All I ask in return is a review on Amazon, Goodreads, or anywhere else you'd like to share.

More info? Watch my Live TV Interview HERE.

6 Tips to Hook Readers in the First Chapter

It's the age-old question: how can I make people interested in my book from the first page? Scores of writers have tried, and scores have failed. Lucky for you, not all hope is lost. There IS a system, and working it the right way will get more people interested in what you have to say quicker.

Follow these guidelines and you'll be on the right track! 

#1.  INTRODUCE THE MAIN CHARACTER ASAP.

Introduce your main character and tell the reader who he is without listing it all out, point-by-point.  The faster the reader knows something, the better.  Try to make this happen within 1-4 paragraphs if possible, and don't make it lengthy, or the reader will get bored and start skimming for tidbits of information.

#2.  RAISE A QUESTION ASAP.

I think you can see how most of these tips are going to be "Do this ASAP".  Remember, the faster people learn the exposition, the more intrigued they'll be, and your book stands a chance being read all the way through.

Open with a question that is relevant to the plot.  Don't try to make the reader wonder what your main character had for breakfast.  People want an intricate question that piques their curiosity and forces them to move forward with the story.  Anything less and they'll put your book back on the shelf.  However, answer the question quickly.  Feed the reader.  Then raise another. Maybe take a bit more time answering that question.

Create a SNOWBALL EFFECT of Q&A.  Send your reader down a hill so that they can't put the book away!

Well, that escalated quickly.

#3.  STRUM THE READER'S HEARTSTRINGS ASAP.

Play on emotion.  Make your reader feel sympathetic, or angry, or happy, or sad.  Give them emotional satisfaction quickly.  Why should they care about your characters?  Buffy Andrews says:  "Three words for a writer:  Make me care."  This is completely true. The reader should care about the characters and what is happening to them.  Create that emotional connection from the get-go, and you'll have them hooked.  Then delve into deeper characterization so readers care more as the story progresses.

#4.  DELVE INTO CHARACTERIZATION ASAP.

This is similar to the emotional portion, but there is a difference, I swear.  Attaching readers emotionally makes them feel for the characters.  Characterization develops those characters as believable people we can relate to (or non-people). Develop your characters quickly and show readers who they are in as few words as possible.  "Brevity is the soul of wit."  The faster the reader sees that this is actually a real person doing real things in real places, the faster they will fall into your story's world, and that is EXACTLY what you want to happen.  Turn words into people.

Make unique characters!

#5.  GIVE YOUR MAIN CHARACTER A GOAL ASAP.

Show readers that the characters want something.  Secure the idea that there will be a journey to a goal that will govern the rest of the story. The main character has to NEED this goal. It must fuel their passion to go on a journey. Whatever their goal, they will endure thick and thin to obtain it. Show that your character is missing something so important, he is willing to do whatever it takes.

#6.  CREATE CONFLICT WITH THAT GOAL.

Just make sure you don't take to long.  If possible, create the conflict by the end of the first chapter, and follow these guidelines:

A.  Make sure the conflict sparks this question:  "How will the characters overcome the conflict?"

B.  Try to strum at the reader's heartstrings when the conflict happens.  Make her feel sympathetic, or angry, or happy, or sad.  Playing with emotions is one of the strongest techniques in storytelling.

C.  When the conflict strikes, make it clear that in order to overcome the conflict, the character's morals and values and choices will be challenged.  The character will be hard-pressed to obtain his goal, and will be further characterized through the conflict.

Do you have anything to add? Share it in the comments! 

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Talking to Pets

Can we just take a moment to think about something? Stop what you're doing and get ready to think. Everyone talks to their pets all the time, right? It's just natural. But our pets have never, in their entire existence, said a single word to us.

Unless your dog is a YouTube sensation

It's just a random thought that popped into my head the other day. It shows how strong our connection with our pets is, and proves that communication isn't just through words, but actions.

We do so much with our pets, and they have such vibrant personalities, that sometimes it just feels like we're talking to them and they're talking to us. But unless your dog is Mishka the Husky, they probably haven't said a single word to you -- EVER. Just barks and whines and whimpers mixed in with the pawing and rolling over and running around the yard.

Now for the big question: can any of your pets actually talk? What words do they say? (I've got a normal dog *sigh*)